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JAFR – Just Another Freakin’ Revision


Last weekend I revisited the Eighties–Blue Thunder was on television, and wonder of wonders, I actually caught it right from the beginning. Now, I grew up in the 80s (I graduated from high school in ’88), so I remember when Blue Thunder came to the theater, and later to network television. Of course, BT couldn’t hold a candle to the sexier, sleeker Airwolf that came on around the same time. 300px-Airwolf_side

Anyway, I always remembered the nickname they gave Daniel Stern’s character: JAFO (Just Another F**king Observer). Loved the premise of the movie, was less enamored with the TV series. Besides, when you have a choice between watching a boxy Gazelle (French helicopter)-Apache (military kick-ass helo) mashup or a sleek Sikorsky Bell 222, well, there’s no contest. Oh, and the Airwolf theme music was so much cooler!

I finally got around to reading some of the various blog postings I subscribe to, and came across this one about passive versus active media consumption. The active vs passive article mentions how we pay attention to media. As readers who migrate into writing, we go from passive consumers who just want a good story, to active consumers who notice the various mechanisms other writers use to keep us reading. We take those devices and use them to strengthen our own writing.

I find I do this when I come across a great story–analyze why the techniques the author uses work. The first time I remember doing this is when I read The Sword of Truth, by Terry Goodkind. OMG. I read the book in, like, two days, but what amazed me was how effective Goodkind was at drawing me on to the next chapter. And the next. BTW, the whole Sword of Truth series is an excellent read. Just as with any series, a few of the books aren’t as good as the others, but overall, his series is at the top of my list of favorites along with Jim Butcher’s Dresden series and J. D. Robb’s Eve Dallas series.

Since then, I’ve tried to pay more attention to how other writers do it, and I’ve tried to make mental notes to recall (hmm, easier said than done some days) while I’m working through my own writing.

I managed to snag a fave at the latest #PitMad fiesta, and figured I’d better go over the book one more time before I submit. This is the same manuscript that brought home the top honor in last year’s Critique My Novel contest. I’ve had some agents ask for the full manuscript, but so far, no takers. I’m trying a few things differently this time than I have in the past. One, I printed the entire book out. I bought a laser printer about a month ago just for this purpose, and doubled-up the pages to conserve paper. It’s easier to see some issues when the writing is on paper. Two, I read somewhere that going through the manuscript backwards helps you to notice things that you miss when you read from front to back. I started at the last page, and I’m just about finished working my way through.

These new-to-me techniques have helped me find the nits in my manuscript. I don’t know how I missed some of them, but reading the book backwards definitely helps, especially for those sneaky passive sentences that need to either be shot or reworked into active ones. The next time you go through a revision, try doing it from back to front. I think it works because it forces you to look at each sentence pretty much on its own; your brain isn’t used to reading that way.

Now, if I can get the beets and kale weeded tonight, I can spend tomorrow actually doing the edits. Aiming to get the mss submitted by next week. Crossing my fingers that this time will be more fruitful than the rest.


Author: Julie Holmes, author

Pen names: J. M. Holmes, J. M. Goebel A fiction writer since elementary school (many years ago), and NaNoWriMo annual participant for a decade, I've been published in small press magazines such as "Fighting Chance" and "The Galactic Citizen". I write adult mystery with a touch of romance, mystery with extrasensory elements, contemporary fantasy, and epic fantasy, and I'm represented by the fabulous Cynthia Zigmund of Second City Publishing Services. In real life, I am a technical writer with a family of two teens, a wonderful hubby, one cat (what writer doesn't have cats??), two dogs, two chickens, and more chipmunks, squirrels, and rabbits than any garden should have to deal with. My garden, our hobby farm, and Nature's annual seasons are some of my muses.

3 thoughts on “JAFR – Just Another Freakin’ Revision

  1. So many great things to comment on here! I remember Blue Thunder and Airwolf…especially loved the latter.

    I often do the same thing with novels (and series) I like, trying to peg what makes them stand out. I’m only four books into Dresden but love it. The ultimate for me is the Aloysius Pendergast series of novels by Douglas Prescott and and Lincoln Child. The world comes to a grinding screeching halt for me whenever they release a new one. I disappear until I can devour them 🙂

    I remember hearing you should read your books backward to catch the flaws years ago. I did try, but I just can’t seem to develop the knack. Good for you that it’s working!

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    • LOL! Yes, Airwolf was definitely my fave at that time. You must remember Riptide and Simon & Simon, too. Ah, those were the days!

      I’m all caught up with Dresden. Waiting for a new book is torture! I might have to go back to the beginning. I read the first Pendergast book, but it didn’t click for me. That said, Lee and Child are both great writers. Hiding out to read a new novel–I can relate! That’s what I tend to do with a new J.D. Robb or Jim Butcher (Dresden) book. 🙂

      It’s weird how well reading the mss backwards works. I think printing it out on paper is also key. Just wish I could wave my magic wand and have all the revisions finished (but we all know–they’re never done 🙂 )


  2. Simon & Simon was one of my addictions in the 80s, LOL!

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